Monday, February 16, 2009

Animatic = Fail

EDITED 3/3/09 - removed for space.

Ugh. I'm glad this won't be the last animatic, 'cause mine turned out wrong. I turned my touching story into story full of lulz. T_T

The middle part is especially undeveloped, because I couldn't figure out how exactly to show the different things she tries to do to bake, to show the effort and care she puts into it. I also didn't figure out how to show her partner still doing work (right now it appears like he did nothing to bake the cake). I think I ruined it...

I just pray that I can figure out how to fix it before it's over with...


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