EDITED 3/3/09 - removed for space.
http://www2.hawaii.edu/~rhigashi/Cherise-MillyAnimatic.mov
Ugh. I'm glad this won't be the last animatic, 'cause mine turned out wrong. I turned my touching story into story full of lulz. T_T
The middle part is especially undeveloped, because I couldn't figure out how exactly to show the different things she tries to do to bake, to show the effort and care she puts into it. I also didn't figure out how to show her partner still doing work (right now it appears like he did nothing to bake the cake). I think I ruined it...
I just pray that I can figure out how to fix it before it's over with...
/emo
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