Tuesday, September 23, 2008

What's in the Box - Revisions

http://www2.hawaii.edu/~cherise/cherise-boxrevisions2.mov

I don't think we're gonna get more time to work on this, so I'll have to see if I can revise it more later on. There's still many problems with it, but I need to go work on Kaveh's stuff now since I spent all day trying to figure this out. Tried to make him/her look around to make sure no one was there before she decided to jump on it to cover it up.

Inner dialogue to refresh memory:
Aww man... who left this lying around?
(walks to box) .... why do I have to clean this up...
(looks in) eh?
OMG!!11!1one! Graaa~! No one must see this!

1 comment:

Brittany said...

I really love how you revised this. The looking around and then flinging her/himself on it at the end is great. :D